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it slips through my fingers like sand. The sands of time, and it seems im outa luck, im outa time, none left to burn. So it seems im the only option left to keep these embers glowing...dimly. And when its final light has gone it will be time for me to go.I have to, it is my path. I have tried my best and couldnt have done any better.       trust me.

"and im nothing more than a line in your book".
©2005-2009 ~shakeyjake
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its how i felt after loosing a relationship. its just my feelings!

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:iconryuken-kai:
hey this is cool. simple yet effective............:D

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If a shortcut wasn't hard, it would just be 'the way'.
:iconangels-and-insects:
cool. + I'm sorry dude.

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YaY!
:iconunknownemo:
good...poetic prose...:)
i write too...i just saw ur quote and thought i was onto something...i like this...
i put my poetry on here though...you in a band?

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Shine.On....DiamondEyes...


i'll wait for you...:(

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:iconshakeyjake:
thanks dude. yea im in a post emo-core (nearly heavy emo). Called...This rose my heart. i like writing specially lyrics for my band. im the bassist backing screamer/singer.

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And im nothing more than a line in your book
:iconunknownemo:
ahh ur a screamer
id love a screamer in my band:):)

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Shine.On....DiamondEyes...


i'll wait for you...:(

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:iconshakeyjake:
hard work but screaming is amazing....and playing bass!

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And im nothing more than a line in your book
:iconunknownemo:
yeah screaming is sweet...what's ur band called?

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Shine.On....DiamondEyes...


i'll wait for you...:(

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